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Monday, 15 June 2015

Dear Snow White....

Today our teacher read us the amazing book: Snow White, because this week was *Book Week*. Every year we have book week and our magnificent librarian Andrea plans it all out. Anyway, after reading the story, the teacher told us to write a letter to Snow White and tell her about the silly things that she done. Like run into the forest and go into some stranger's house. She told us to write to her and explain what she has done wrong, then give her some positive advice. I was Snow White's real mother from heaven. It's great pretending to be someone and writing a letter. Here is my story:


Dear Snow White,
This is your Mother from heaven. A little angel came and gave me a story about you. It was a marvellous story but… You did quite some silly things in the story like, run away into the forest and go inside some stranger's house, and sleep on their bed! That was really stupid of you. But I still love you. Anyway, you even let a creepy old lady (Who was the next Queen, and who took over me) come into the house, and she told you about a magic apple. You should’ve known there was no special apple tree from high school…. She was a stranger! She tricked you. And why have you always been so nice darling? I know I taught you to be nice, but not really nice to a creepy old lady! Okay now that was overboard dear. And one more thing, why did you go with the prince? he was a complete stranger too. You just don’t meet someone who just kissed you and then marry them. Darling me and you father were BFF’s until I got married with him because I knew him. Don’t you remember anything I have taught you? I told you never talk to strangers ! First I think you should’ve ran to the village and lived with the orphans, and change your style and look and act like a villager. And second you should’ve listened to Grumpy. Grumpy may be a big fuss, and a angry dwarf but he’s always true with his words and he’s a softy. I just had a cup of tea with him. Wait I'm going off track, anyway, you should’ve listened to Grumpy!! And thirdly, your should’ve got to know the prince even better. Dear I hope there was a time machine to turn back time and still be alive so all that ever happened to you never happened. I love you with all my heart and I hope you have a happy life. But remember I still don’t like the prince. (He might be a wicked Prince) But I'm happy that you’re having a good life up in the clouds. I will always look down and see what your doing. I love you so much dear good bye now.
Love
Mother White.
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo


Letter To Snow White

Place She Lives In: Cloud Castle And In Fairytale Land.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Emalata
    I am a student that attends Wesley Intermediate I like you used Punctuation In you story/letter to snow white
    Keep it up And I cant wait to see what your other writing says
    Where did you get the photos from?

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