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Friday, 6 June 2014

The Person I Treasure The Most

My older brother Rodrick

The person I treasure the most is my brother Rodrick. He is the best brother you’ll ever have. He’s only 14 years old. He’s the oldest in my family and the one who takes care of me and my older sister. He’s always focused on my learning and always check if my homework is done. He is the best brother you’ll ever have.

My brother is a very remarkable huge teenager. He has big muscles that when you touch them they feel like a bunch of rocks. He is skinny because he always trains. Rodrick always wears white big singlets. You can see him and adore and like him. Like really like like him, But if you're a girl reading this and you think you like him just to tell you….. he’s already got a girlfriend. As soon as you see him he is AMAZING.


My brother is sometimes mean. But I like it when he is mean. Roderick always says he smacks me cause he love’s me. Weird right but I know that is true. He sometime helps me with my homework and is always a person who makes the right choices. He is so kind (well sometimes) and really funny. Roderick loves to make fun of me and my older sister and he loves to make joke’s.

My brother’s action’s are: That he loves to run run run. Everyday he run’s and every race he wins. He love’s to play rugby and league. He always wishes one day he can play for the All blacks. (A rugby team). I think my brother will really achieve that goal because he is always focused on rugby .He love’s to spend time on his phone. But gets carried away with it. My brother always train in the gym and loves to swim in the pools thats why he is strong.


I choose my brother because he is the man of my family. He has his own house at Tonga. It’s the house that I grew up in when I was little before I came to N.Z. When he was born my dad gave it to him as a 1st child present. One time my older cousin and his wife Paea came to live in it. They lived in it for 2 years and Paea got kicked out because my uncle died. My brother got angry of my aunty for kicking out Paea out of his house and demanded that my aunty to go back to her house and paea to come to his house. My brother is the boss and whatever he say’s about his house it happens.
    



Emalata

2 comments:

  1. Your brother sounds like a remarkable young man Emalata. It's great that you can look up to him and learn from him. Interesting piece of writing I enjoyed your simile describing Rodrick's muscles being like rocks :)

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  2. Thank you for the comment Ms.M. Thanks. :D :D

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